Tuesday, May 23, 2006

Practice Error Correction Sentences

Here are the sentences we did in class - with the errors but without corrections, for you to use to practice.

  1. I writeing a report called The orphan trains of New York.
  2. My friend Les and I can learn you about this trains.
  3. In 1853, the children’s aid society of new York seed thousands of homeless children.
  4. Charles L Brace the founder maked a unusual proposel.
  5. The Childrens Aid Society shipped thousands of childs to the midwest and west.
  6. Yes Charles Brace though that raiseing them children in gooder environments was important.
  7. An ad appeared in the daily record our newspaper, before the orphan train’s arrival.
  8. In dowagiac Michigan forty seven children found new homes in a single week.
  9. Les said “Some of the children led normal, pleasant lifes with their new families.
  10. Other children however were mistreated: some were overworked, and others were even beaten.